Tensed
Riveting thoughts
Yearning heart for bliss wins
Staggering, first step moves slow
Triumphs love.
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Form For All ~ The Cinquain
five-line poem; twenty-two syllables laid out two, four, six, eight, then two again. |
"Riveting thoughts" Something about this line that I just love! Love does triumph over all!
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed the tension in this cinquain, and, of course, she will say yes. Smiles.
ReplyDeleteAlways joyful when love triumphs!
ReplyDeleteCute and hope for the best
ReplyDeletesmiles...gotta love it when love triumphs....nice to work in the acrostic as well....
ReplyDelete...oh, yes...love wins in the end my friend... and you give double treat here... an acrostics & a cinquain both together with a great execution... nicely... smiles...
ReplyDeleteA cinquain acrostic! A very nice variation; one I'd love to try.
ReplyDeleteLove triumphs - of course ~ Enjoyed this cinquain acrostic ~
ReplyDeleteWow- a cinquain acrostic... impressive.
ReplyDeleteslow is so good in today's relationships... nice capture
ReplyDeleteQuite a challenge you set yourself - a cinquain acrostic. You've not quite got the American cinquain form - only one syllable in the first line and three in the last (should be 2 in each) - but as I've said elsewhere, the for is not the point; it's the prompt. If my prompt has helped you to write this poem, then I am a very happy man.
ReplyDeleteah it's good to take slow step...def. in the right direction...nice...always glad when i hear about happy love stories..smiles
ReplyDeleteThat was a tough prompt, Novel...and you cracked it effortlessly!! Great acrostic!
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