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Thursday, March 14, 2013

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Tensed

Riveting thoughts

Yearning heart for bliss wins

Staggering, first step moves slow

Triumphs love.





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Form For All ~ The Cinquain

Definition - Cinquain:
five-line poem;
twenty-two syllables
laid out two, four, six, eight, then two
again.

13 comments:

  1. "Riveting thoughts" Something about this line that I just love! Love does triumph over all!

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  2. Enjoyed the tension in this cinquain, and, of course, she will say yes. Smiles.

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  3. smiles...gotta love it when love triumphs....nice to work in the acrostic as well....

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  4. ...oh, yes...love wins in the end my friend... and you give double treat here... an acrostics & a cinquain both together with a great execution... nicely... smiles...

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  5. A cinquain acrostic! A very nice variation; one I'd love to try.

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  6. Love triumphs - of course ~ Enjoyed this cinquain acrostic ~

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  7. Wow- a cinquain acrostic... impressive.

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  8. slow is so good in today's relationships... nice capture

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  9. Quite a challenge you set yourself - a cinquain acrostic. You've not quite got the American cinquain form - only one syllable in the first line and three in the last (should be 2 in each) - but as I've said elsewhere, the for is not the point; it's the prompt. If my prompt has helped you to write this poem, then I am a very happy man.

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  10. ah it's good to take slow step...def. in the right direction...nice...always glad when i hear about happy love stories..smiles

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  11. That was a tough prompt, Novel...and you cracked it effortlessly!! Great acrostic!

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