"Riveting thoughts" Something about this line that I just love! Love does triumph over all!
Enjoyed the tension in this cinquain, and, of course, she will say yes. Smiles.
Always joyful when love triumphs!
Cute and hope for the best
smiles...gotta love it when love triumphs....nice to work in the acrostic as well....
...oh, yes...love wins in the end my friend... and you give double treat here... an acrostics & a cinquain both together with a great execution... nicely... smiles...
A cinquain acrostic! A very nice variation; one I'd love to try.
Love triumphs - of course ~ Enjoyed this cinquain acrostic ~
Wow- a cinquain acrostic... impressive.
slow is so good in today's relationships... nice capture
Quite a challenge you set yourself - a cinquain acrostic. You've not quite got the American cinquain form - only one syllable in the first line and three in the last (should be 2 in each) - but as I've said elsewhere, the for is not the point; it's the prompt. If my prompt has helped you to write this poem, then I am a very happy man.
ah it's good to take slow step...def. in the right direction...nice...always glad when i hear about happy love stories..smiles
That was a tough prompt, Novel...and you cracked it effortlessly!! Great acrostic!
Brickbats and bouquets, both are welcome!