REVISITING PERCEPTIONS

FIRST COPY:

                 Upright reflection

                       Mirroring velocities

               Companions

                                                                                                Above  

                  ……………………………………………………………………….and

                                                                                                        Below

                                                                        On tiled floors

               

                                                            Precise formations

                               

                            Moving aberration

REVISED:

             Upright reflections

                    Gliding to mirror velocities

                           Of actions in tandem

Rhyming lub-dub-lub – dub

                            In precise formations

      Of moving aberrations

              Casting bigamous silhouettes

I have used both these pieces for different prompts. In fact the words in the revised draft are borrowed from another piece written for Form for all: Meter and the pic was in the same spirit as this one - reflections on the floor. I am smitten by the concept of this picture! Open to suggestions. 

For dVerse where Victoria C.Slotto wants us to revise an earlier piece at:

dVerse Meeting the Bar: “Give It to Me One More Time, (Do It Over Again)”