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Thursday, May 30, 2013

MY SAFE HAVEN


Memories sift
 To a cocooned warmth
Cradled to the tune of pink hues
Caressed by gentle waves
Of tender love
Anointing my skin
Feeding my elements
Mothering me, swaddled in its fold
I recall 
None of those transient moments
To describe the form, but
For its name in substance – 
Bliss!









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15 comments:

  1. :) yes this is the best safest heaven....far away from worldly tensions and stress....

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  2. Beautiful. I think this must be the most comforting safe haven....the one perhaps we all continue to yearn for throughout our lives, but can never quite duplicate.

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  3. They say we long for it all our lives, and being born is one of the biggest traumas a human endures--which is we we can't remember--but somehow part of us remembers that safest place, always.

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  4. How lovely ... my youngest son (now 50) tells me he remembers being born ... insisting he remembers. We all laugh .. and then we wonder 'what if.'

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  5. Such a lovely remembrance........I agree, this is the nurturing and comfort we spend our lives searching for.

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  6. Wow! I agree that it's something that we long for deep in our subconscious for the rest of our lives.

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  7. That is the ultimate safe place! Well done!

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  8. Oh, how I wish we could harbor memories of this bliss. So well written, Akila. ♥

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  9. The memory...if we could recall it...would be beyond wonderful. Meanwhile, a beautiful write.
    K

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  10. How lovely, this is surely a safe, nurturing place to be from a caring mom :)

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  11. It comforts me to know you knew you came from a safe womb. To know there was pure bliss in that place and you'd be loved and cherished when you came into the world. Thank you for sharing the joy of your thoughts of pure safety.

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  12. The glory and beauty of a safe womb...such a moving piece.

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  13. This is really beautiful!:) I liked the title:)

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