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Thursday, April 11, 2013

LEAVE GRIEF LEAVE!



“Leave now… you grief… leave!”

Wishing,
Spring, in laughter, impromptu
Sparking momentous moments
Bask in glory!
Raises spirit to love, living
Inviting colours
Cloak Life with....

Memories!.....

With life-cloak
Colours inviting
Living, love to spirit raises
Glory in, bask!
Moments, momentous sparking impromptu
Laughter, in spring,
Wishing,

“Leave…grief...you now leave!”

Tweaked a bit of the Palindrome form with ,,,, - , ....

for MeetingTheBar: Palindromes at dVerse tended by Gayle Rose.


Three word wednesday - Grief, raise, bask




19 comments:

  1. That is really cool. I also like how you blended the prompts...i didn't realize you had the 3WW words in it until I saw it noted. Nicely written.

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  2. This feels both strong and beautiful, I especially like the command.

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  3. Many uses of "palindrome" -- "grief Bask raises colors ..." I would have been cool if those four words were a phrase in and of themselves too.
    A light and happy poem!

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  4. nice....i like the liberties you took to make this roll easy in the reading....grief is an interesting journey for many...if only we could just tell it to leave, you know...

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  5. A double constraint - wow, you really don't make life easy for yourself, do you? I like what you have done here, it flows naturally both on paper and off the tongue.

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  6. Title and words rolling back and forth, lovely share ~

    I do wish grief to leave soon and to bask in spring colors ~

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  7. Laughter really does help improve one's mood.

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  8. Wonderfully done, Akila and managing to do two prompts with it too...very clever. If only our grief could be dispatched so easily...

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  9. I'm so enjoying how everyone is working with the beastly palindrome and the fact that you used it for an additional prompt is amazing!

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  10. Hey I have nominated to Liebster Awards in this post at my blog. Please do take out few minutes to take a look

    http://www.tushar-agarwal.com/2013/04/the-liebster-awards.html

    Keep blogging.

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  11. spring and inviting colors...love this...yearning for spring as well...i like what you did with the form

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  12. Such a positive optimistic lament!
    Cheers

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  13. Very well done and a vibrant picture of colour. I like this.

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  14. nicely written.....
    sreeja
    writingonjusttowrite.blogspot.com

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  15. Beautiful poem. Grief, it just never listens to what we order it to do.

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  16. a pretty and uplifting Spring poem.

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  17. I really loved the composition and the positivity! Very nice =)

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  18. This is uplifting for sure.......a very positive message!

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