('Rangoli' - drawing on the floor done with rice powder and colours, done by me)
Doused in a vivid
demeanor
Germinates a promise
To walk together
Through Meandering phases
Of juxtaposed emotions
To reveal
A graph peaking after every slide
Patterned!
So akin to the Creator
Reflects an introspection
Naughty! To say
in jest about Him
Pushing souls in a quandary
Ravaging, at times
Reducing to, sobriety,
The lowest in the ladder of hope
Pick up the strands again
Paint myriad hues from
pale shades
Discovering ‘I, You and We’
Resting on a fine balance of love
Called Home.
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3WW Doused, Naughty and Pale
Poets United Verse First: Patterns
To walk together
ReplyDeleteThrough Meandering phases
I love this imaginary and the great use of the words. Well done
Love those last two lines. :)
ReplyDeleteI was going to mention the same lines that Rosemary mentioned. The last two lines definitely draw the poem together in a strong way.
ReplyDeleteI find this intriguing... especially the last 2 lines.
ReplyDeleteThe line that really got to me was "The lowest in the ladder of hope." So many layers in this powerful, textured poem.
ReplyDeletePushing souls to a quandary... STRONG line and image.
ReplyDeleteLife has a way of falling into pattern...you've beautifully weaved those words into this beautiful piece. Great job!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully arranged words.
ReplyDeleteI specially like the last 3 lines ~ Thanks for sharing ~
ReplyDeletevery nice. I love your word choices, really a fine job making these choices seem so subtle, I try to do that myself, really nice job and the bolded in here was a really nice touch
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