tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post3706451635034748573..comments2023-06-11T08:03:00.675-07:00Comments on Novel ideas!: HOME!TCPChttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-69321859726225413162013-03-05T11:26:31.792-08:002013-03-05T11:26:31.792-08:00very nice. I love your word choices, really a fin...very nice. I love your word choices, really a fine job making these choices seem so subtle, I try to do that myself, really nice job and the bolded in here was a really nice touchAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-26726344563854338942013-03-02T18:25:18.687-08:002013-03-02T18:25:18.687-08:00I specially like the last 3 lines ~ Thanks for sh...I specially like the last 3 lines ~ Thanks for sharing ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-31841384042954794812013-02-28T22:38:02.717-08:002013-02-28T22:38:02.717-08:00Beautifully arranged words.Beautifully arranged words.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-25159917391869589862013-02-28T11:08:43.047-08:002013-02-28T11:08:43.047-08:00Life has a way of falling into pattern...you'v...Life has a way of falling into pattern...you've beautifully weaved those words into this beautiful piece. Great job!Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-91159268127500007792013-02-28T10:54:52.431-08:002013-02-28T10:54:52.431-08:00Pushing souls to a quandary... STRONG line and ima...Pushing souls to a quandary... STRONG line and image.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-365281819439323442013-02-28T09:59:55.192-08:002013-02-28T09:59:55.192-08:00The line that really got to me was "The lowes...The line that really got to me was "The lowest in the ladder of hope." So many layers in this powerful, textured poem.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-9006528850941548502013-02-28T07:09:42.700-08:002013-02-28T07:09:42.700-08:00I find this intriguing... especially the last 2 li...I find this intriguing... especially the last 2 lines.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-14622772362400463352013-02-28T03:55:55.235-08:002013-02-28T03:55:55.235-08:00I was going to mention the same lines that Rosemar...I was going to mention the same lines that Rosemary mentioned. The last two lines definitely draw the poem together in a strong way.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-27961425835020554712013-02-28T01:48:02.614-08:002013-02-28T01:48:02.614-08:00Love those last two lines. :) Love those last two lines. :) Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-86576978832602514722013-02-28T00:11:51.722-08:002013-02-28T00:11:51.722-08:00To walk together
Through Meandering phases
I love...To walk together<br />Through Meandering phases<br /><br />I love this imaginary and the great use of the words. Well done alan1704https://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.com