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Wednesday, October 16, 2013

ARTIST

 

ARTIST
Nouns
Verbs
Blood
Passion
Clock
Create
Human
Emote
Roses
Preserve
Toys
Dwell
Rainbow
Gather
Light
Portray
Sunshine
Garnish
Eyes
Decorate
Diary
Inspire
 


Blood spills passion ~
Gathering (mere) toys as dew-draped roses
For the emoting eyes

 
Dwellings out of the clock
Creates rainbows~
A garnished platter


Of refracting lights
Inspiring the human diary
To portray sunshine

For Verse First where Kim inspires!!

 



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9 comments:

  1. Sherry Blue SkyOctober 16, 2013 at 11:39 AM

    Oh, an artist! Beautifully described, especially the closing lines:)

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  2. Laurie KolpOctober 16, 2013 at 2:40 PM

    Love the human diary to portray sunshine!

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  3. humbirdOctober 16, 2013 at 6:41 PM

    ' rainbows~
    A garnished platter
    Of refracting lights' ~ nice description.

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  4. Brian MillerOctober 16, 2013 at 6:55 PM

    inspiring the human diary
    really like that line as it gave me pause to think
    on how true it is...

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  5. PanchaliOctober 16, 2013 at 11:45 PM

    Akila,
    And what a beautifully 'garnished platter' you presented here! Amazing....lovely description! :)

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  6. Vandana SharmaOctober 17, 2013 at 1:00 AM

    May that sunshine brights everyone;s life!!

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  7. UnknownOctober 17, 2013 at 9:44 AM

    The entire piece is image-filled and succinct, but that last stanza really jumps off the page. A wonderful contribution, Akila.

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  8. GraceOctober 18, 2013 at 5:52 AM

    Creative verses ~ My favorite is the second one, creating rainbows out of rocks ~

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  9. Rosemary Nissen-WadeOctober 18, 2013 at 6:30 AM

    Nicely done!

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