ARTIST
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Nouns
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Verbs
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Blood
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Passion
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Clock
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Create
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Human
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Emote
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Roses
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Preserve
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Toys
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Dwell
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Rainbow
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Gather
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Light
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Portray
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Sunshine
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Garnish
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Eyes
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Decorate
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Diary
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Inspire
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Blood spills
passion ~
Gathering (mere) toys
as dew-draped rosesFor the emoting eyes
Creates rainbows~
A garnished platter
Of refracting lights
Inspiring the human
diaryTo portray sunshine
For Verse First where Kim inspires!!
Oh, an artist! Beautifully described, especially the closing lines:)
ReplyDeleteLove the human diary to portray sunshine!
ReplyDelete' rainbows~
ReplyDeleteA garnished platter
Of refracting lights' ~ nice description.
inspiring the human diary
ReplyDeletereally like that line as it gave me pause to think
on how true it is...
Akila,
ReplyDeleteAnd what a beautifully 'garnished platter' you presented here! Amazing....lovely description! :)
May that sunshine brights everyone;s life!!
ReplyDeleteThe entire piece is image-filled and succinct, but that last stanza really jumps off the page. A wonderful contribution, Akila.
ReplyDeleteCreative verses ~ My favorite is the second one, creating rainbows out of rocks ~
ReplyDeleteNicely done!
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