KNOCK! KNOCK!! KNOCK!!!...
Un-inviting elements seat to steer
Thoughts in quandary
Meeting premonition
Of indecisive perceptions
Derailing momentum
Taking on scheme of things
Plotted to swivel the balance
Composing long breaths, beating heavy,
Perspiring sobs in silence
Holding a full stop in abeyance
Till….
Rhythm musters to sync with the new song
Scooping on the remnants
Tied and knotted into a platter
Waiting to gather the settled dust
To re-visit HopE in the chAmbers of desiRes breaThing
Sam has us trying riddles.
Lovely take Akila! Deals more with emotional elements the way I see it! Great!
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re-visiting HopE in the chAmbers of desiRes breaThing...ha..i like.. the chamber of desire is cool...and sometimes it's just time for a new song...eh..
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ReplyDeleteha. i like how you hid heart in the last line.....smiles...the answer right before our eyes....very cool riddle...and i like the full stop...smiles.
ReplyDeleteah the emotions I get... but pipointing the solution is very hard...
ReplyDeleteNicely done...great riddle composed of all the emotions of the heart..I hear the hope ;)
ReplyDeleteCleverly done. 'Holding a full stop in abeyance' oh very good!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Could it be the rythym of the song, or the drums, or percussion?
ReplyDeleteThanks to Brian's article on Monday, I think I have it! HEART! Clever.
ReplyDeleteWell I wouldn't have guessed it ~ Cool on the hidden word ~
ReplyDeleteHappy weekend ~
Love the hidden answer (thanks) ...and did you describe the four chambers?
ReplyDeleteThe heart of the matter?
ReplyDeleteWell done hiding the answer in plain sight!
ReplyDeleteLove it!
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