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Sunday, July 28, 2013

THE KING

Photo credit: Diana Matisz
(on flick'r as Avatress) of the blog Life Through Blue Eyes)

White
Rises
In obscure
Collaging shades
Tinged purity
Bold for the nemesis
Of enveloping shadows
Of silhouetted amoebic forms
In intimidating densities
As keeper of a peaceful habitat


Weekend Mini-Challenge: Etheree(al)at IGWRT by hedgewitch



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8 comments:

  1. Susie ClevengerJuly 28, 2013 at 10:52 PM

    Beautiful...I love the ending!

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  2. UnknownJuly 29, 2013 at 12:11 AM

    enveloping shadows...lovely write.

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  3. hedgewitchJuly 29, 2013 at 7:26 AM

    'Collaging shades' is really great language--and I love the duality in the moon, nemesis or keeper. Really neat word choices make these syllables larger than the sum of their parts. Thanks so much for joining us for this one.

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  4. GraceJuly 29, 2013 at 8:18 AM

    I specially like that last line - keeper of the peaceful habitat ~

    Good work on the form ~

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  5. AnonymousJuly 29, 2013 at 11:02 AM

    I also enjoyed that concept of collaging shades, Akila. A whole new way of looking at the night sky.

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  6. Vandana SharmaJuly 29, 2013 at 9:44 PM

    Wow,I never saw moon in this light( as a king), that position was always taken by " SUN". But this is really amazing and moon is indeed the king of night.

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  7. Maggie GraceJuly 31, 2013 at 9:46 AM

    I like how you played with the shades/variations of color for your writing. Very nice!

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  8. Lisa A. WilliamsJuly 31, 2013 at 10:13 AM

    Beautiful description of the night sky.

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