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Sunday, July 28, 2013

THE KING

Photo credit: Diana Matisz

White
Rises
In obscure
Collaging shades
Tinged purity
Bold for the nemesis
Of enveloping shadows
Of silhouetted amoebic forms
In intimidating densities
As keeper of a peaceful habitat


Weekend Mini-Challenge: Etheree(al)at IGWRT by hedgewitch



8 comments:

  1. 'Collaging shades' is really great language--and I love the duality in the moon, nemesis or keeper. Really neat word choices make these syllables larger than the sum of their parts. Thanks so much for joining us for this one.

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  2. I specially like that last line - keeper of the peaceful habitat ~

    Good work on the form ~

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  3. I also enjoyed that concept of collaging shades, Akila. A whole new way of looking at the night sky.

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  4. Wow,I never saw moon in this light( as a king), that position was always taken by " SUN". But this is really amazing and moon is indeed the king of night.

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  5. I like how you played with the shades/variations of color for your writing. Very nice!

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  6. Beautiful description of the night sky.

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