No brickbats here. Though brief, this was memorable. Great use of idioms here! -Mike
ha - counting the blessings is a good thing - and a clean slate invites for a dance for sure - new space(s) - smiles
...and i hope by the time your boat gets totally burnt out you have already gathered enough blessings to aim for a bigger boat & tougher waves... smiles... goodluck Akila!
For sure we all need to count our blessings! But hopefully the boat will NOT burn....smiles!
smiles....i would def burn the boat and count the blessings....the only way to look is forward for sure...ha...and i am ready to dance....very cool response...
I like the idioms in the form, very creative combination~ And yes, to count the blessings is good ~
Sometimes burning the boat is necessary .. never look back and get a clean slate. Nice form and use of idioms...
A clean slate invites..always nice to start a new day with a clean slate.
Make sure you're not in the boat and rockin' it when you burn it! Short and effective!
Yes we all should count our blessing for they give meaning to our life.
Now this is surely cause for celebration, Akila - sigh, it feels good to be back writing poetry.
A clean slate invitesChuckles! Yes, there are lots going! It's a matter of a start for the slate is open for anything! Nicely Akila!Hank
I...liked your write...but there is no such thing as a clean slate...but I forget everything, normal people do not... Great write...
Brickbats and bouquets, both are welcome!