There is so much we can learn from a child, and they are such willing teachers!
hi akila,such an innocent take to the prompt..loved the cuteness..i cant say anything bout syllables as even im learning.tc.
A tough challenge and you've done well....Beautifully penned, Akila.
Your poem is incredibly sweet ........ brings back memories of my toddlers ~ long ago.
Very sweet and sincere, a good form for this because the symmetry calms.
Lovely thoughts Akila ~ We learn a lot from our innocent children ~ You got the form correctly ~Thanks for participating in the Sunday Challenge ~
Found this at Toads AND Poetry Pantry, I think. A very nice rictometer. Motherhood is always a welcome subject, and the "naughty" reference means you are a strong but gentle mother. Aren't they simply a gift from God? Thanks, Akila! Amy
How lovely, subject and the description of your girl.
I can feel the love in your poem, beautiful :)
Living today, I amlearning...I loved these lines.
smiles...my children have taught me much...reminding me how to truly live...nicely done to form....
awwww this is absolutely beautiful, you know how to write sweet poems!
We live...we learnnot trying to discern whence comes wisdom...yet grateful when we are allowed to know.My child.Thank you,my child.
Brickbats and bouquets, both are welcome!