The Sunday Mini-Challenge : Lune at
IGRT had me alternating between Collom Lune (3 5 3 words) and Kelly lune
(5 3 5 syllables) types of poetry. And as I have this habit of picking up more
than a prompt in one poetry, this piece is on Spring (Poetics —
SpRinG) with the use of the word melting to
fit in Out of Standard: Climate Free Friday at IGRT. Since it is Monday,
so sharing it with Poetry Pantry - # 147
Having done all this sharings,
not sure of coming back and reading. Nursing dotty down with fever and I think
some of it is rubbing on me as well. Apologies for being selfish but could not
resist the temptation to pen down some random thoughts. So much for an
introduction! Here is the poem….
Sun wakes up
Melting in Mother
Nature’s bosom
Welcoming colours aboard.
Myriad shades anoint
The lush - green
Emanate fragrance.
Early birds chirping
Flap along the first ray
Feast on worms.
Clean roads pave the way
Pulling me
Out of my blanket.
A mystical whiff
Fills me, stirs my soul
My true calling.
Time to bury past
Spin new dreams
A new beginning.
ah it's good to spin new dreams in the awakening of nature... spring makes things new and i think this swaps over to us..smiles
ReplyDeleteah, something about the sweet spring air that is good for the soul, different from other seasons' smells ..get rest.
ReplyDeleteSuch beautiful words of new beginning
ReplyDeleteI have s warm feeling inside from your words, like spring sun shining in my face.
ReplyDeleteLovely verse!
ReplyDeleteYes, spring always is a time for new dreams! I enjoyed each of these...
ReplyDeleteI like the scent and spirit of new beginning ~
ReplyDeleteThanks for participating in RT Sunday's Challenge ~
Hopeful!
ReplyDeleteA string of six beautiful word-beads
ReplyDeleteGood one Akila..........
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, I love "spin new dreams".
ReplyDelete