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Wednesday, December 18, 2013

BLESSED!

Rambling thoughts

Watch the connections unfold themselves

One by one – independently inter-dependent

Butterflies tinker the spirit

Birds chirp greetings on the journey

Checking senses alive to wafting dispensations

I have a smile today to pass on

Gratitude comes in a deep breath

Assimilating this moment gifted to me

Cocooned from thoughts of destined happenstances

Promises culmination of warm pleasantries

Into cherished memories, to dwell,

While counting strands graying under the sun


Verse First ~ Gifts & Blessings

20 comments:

  1. So many phrases I wish I had thought of. Great job.

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  2. I have a smile today to pass on..

    What a gift in the giving and receiving.

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  3. assimilating the moment/the gift given you....each one is...each breath...i think in realizing this we experience life all the more...pass that smile on...smiles.

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  4. I think smiles look really good when accompanied by graying strands.

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  5. Everyday life has so much to offer, only we need to realise this:)

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  6. Lovely Gift........... to start a day with smile

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  7. Taking a deep breath and really feeling where we are can be a revelation..you have captured that perfectly

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  8. that sounds like a moment at peace with the world and yourself and just everything... a yes moment...loved it

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  9. a smile under any colored strands are a good thing... nice peaceful write...

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  10. the world does need a smile.....beautifully penned :)

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  11. I agree...many of your phrases and wording are perfectly done. Very well written.

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  12. "Cocooned from thoughts of destined happenstances" ..loved it..great poem ..:-)

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  13. I'm counting those strands too! They appear faster and faster!

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  14. Gratitude comes in a deep breath
    Assimilating this moment gifted to me

    Many fail to acknowledge good things in life. Great to be aware of it all the time. Nicely Akila!

    Hank

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  15. Beautiful write Akila. :) Have a wonderful holiday.

    Ankita

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  16. ''a smile today to pass on'',,,,can there be a gift better than that.great one.

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