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Perhaps they have two heads yet share one heart?A very nice folding and merging of the concepts and words... a poetic inkblot on which we given the random flow of ink may paint our dreams...
Folded images, folded words!
Very cool! Love how your form echoes the symmetry of the images! This reminds me of a book called "Only Revolutions." It's two interconnecting stories that are printed opposite each other in the book.
that is really cool. I have to keep going back and rereading to compare
Kudos on the form. I loved how my eyes had to move and how that affected the read.
Very clever - especially the double switch of Real/Reflected lines.
nice physical formation with incredibly strong word choice. your middle stanza seems to flip it inside out. very cool.
Love the way you approached this...the two sided reflection...very nice!!
This is really cool - love the way the words mirror the way the blots do.
Unique, interesting combinations words-images-reflectios
YOU are so clever! I love this...the two sided coin of reflected thought ;DFun to read
:) very intelligently done!
That was a nice way to take the test -clever girl! Take a bow!
What a unique approach!
Brickbats and bouquets, both are welcome!
Perhaps they have two heads yet share one heart?
ReplyDeleteA very nice folding and merging of the concepts and words... a poetic inkblot on which we given the random flow of ink may paint our dreams...
Folded images, folded words!
ReplyDeleteVery cool! Love how your form echoes the symmetry of the images! This reminds me of a book called "Only Revolutions." It's two interconnecting stories that are printed opposite each other in the book.
ReplyDeletethat is really cool. I have to keep going back and rereading to compare
ReplyDeleteKudos on the form. I loved how my eyes had to move and how that affected the read.
ReplyDeleteVery clever - especially the double switch of Real/Reflected lines.
ReplyDeletenice physical formation with incredibly strong word choice. your middle stanza seems to flip it inside out. very cool.
ReplyDeleteLove the way you approached this...the two sided reflection...very nice!!
ReplyDeleteThis is really cool - love the way the words mirror the way the blots do.
ReplyDeleteUnique, interesting combinations words-images-reflectios
ReplyDeleteYOU are so clever! I love this...the two sided coin of reflected thought ;D
ReplyDeleteFun to read
:) very intelligently done!
ReplyDeleteThat was a nice way to take the test -clever girl! Take a bow!
ReplyDeleteWhat a unique approach!
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