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Thursday, January 17, 2013

DREAMS

Unexplored shores
Hosting dreams unlimited
Lapped by sweltering desires
Secreted fears loom
Starkly naked
Lay juxtaposed in the sub – conscious
The self blooms
In a horizon sans strings
Living in a momentary trance
Rhyming with galloping wishes
Ridden by kings and beggars alike
Surreal
Till exposed
Cloaked by reality.

(Written for One Single Impression for the prompt "Naked")

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    1. Ajay Kontham,

      welcome to my space. Glad that you liked it., Sorry for the delay in responding to your comment!

      Akila

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    2. Its okay.
      Reply whenever possible.

      Take Care. :)

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    1. Thank you Green Speck

      welcome to my space. sorry for the delay in responding to you.

      Akila

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  3. This is a lovely share ~ I like the self blooming part ~

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    1. Heaven!

      Thank you. sorry for the delay in respondign to your comment.

      Welcome to my space!

      Akila

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  4. Oh dear. You have revealed the secrets of dream that scientists are struggling to find and that too in the most beautiful way. Thoroughly love this poem from top to bottom.. Can't take away one word from it.
    Just Amazing..

    Regards,
    Deepak

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  5. Deepak,

    welcome to my space. thank you for the appreciation. :)

    Akila

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