(Photo Credit: Brooke Shaden; More of her at http://brookeshaden.com/gallery/)
You hand me five
balloons
drawn on pink paper of
dreams
Your teacher has
listed:
1
2
3
of your matchless
beauty leaving
4
5
for me – ‘THEY’ stare back,
...Mother knows best
weaving butterflies of your
choice
flitting along your
path of dreams
growing with breaths
of spring
as you twinkle
laughter in insouciant caress
of petal-like cut from
the remnants of that pink paper
I wonder what could
define you as unique,
bowing down to ticking
pauses of seconds
shameful, unable
to spell the names of your
colours –
Mother knows best...
Don’t ‘THEY’ know?
You are an undisguised
blessing – gift
wrapped by an
umbilical cord
listening to my
unheard footsteps,
while I beat the daily
noise and
tie your feet in
anklets for and of conveniences
often, shadowing them
as call of duty
4
5
–What do I write about
my harvest moon?
smiles.
ReplyDeletedef there is tension between what the mother sees and what the teacher sees
and the connections are different...both have their own validity...from their perspective....often for me it is finding where they come together in between for the good of the student...
I like how you describe the way a parent see their child. but I can also understand how hard it can be to penetrate and understand how it's viewed by other.. especially when put down on paper.. I liked the form here... quite unique
ReplyDeleteI love the what the mother sees and value in the child ~ I am sure it is quite different from what the teacher said ~ Surely a gift beautiful as the harvest moon ~ Good to see you Akila ~
ReplyDeletenone loves like a mother, this reminded me of the excitement my kids had drawing and then giving them away.
ReplyDeletesmiles... it's good if we see our kids with eyes of love - a teacher always sees them more neutral and always compares them to other students as well... if we take those two views it surely gives us a bigger picture of our kids and we can help them find their ways in life
ReplyDeleteah so well said as a mother.....loved this piece Akila....
ReplyDeleteI find describing some one you love in words can be quite tricky...how do you narrow the list down...
ReplyDeletevery nicely written.