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Friday, March 21, 2014

THEY- LIVE

Caught!
the crescent-moon
in twin –waves...
Camaraderie 
with crimson-glory
Siphons out
Day – silhouettes
When a mackerel(ed) dew
Erases 
the diamond - drops
That dream-canvass
now burns
the four-chambers
Bitter-sweet



Kennings – the metaphor of Skalds – Phew!

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7 comments:

  1. brudbergMarch 21, 2014 at 12:48 PM

    Ah.. what soft and tender use of kennings.. crimson-glory.. sigh.. love that

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  2. ClaudiaMarch 21, 2014 at 12:53 PM

    mackerel(ed) dew...very cool.. and oh i love when they team up to set that dream canvas aflame...nice

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  3. Brian MillerMarch 21, 2014 at 2:04 PM

    no dont let the dream canvas burn...smiles....i wanna go to sleep...and i havent even eaten dinner yet....smiles...mackeraled dew is very cool...

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  4. AnonymousMarch 21, 2014 at 8:12 PM

    this evoked a vision of jewelry to me,

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  5. AnonymousMarch 21, 2014 at 9:44 PM

    Intersting imagery...beautifully done.

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  6. The BizzaMarch 22, 2014 at 9:40 PM

    Diamond-drops... I like. Maybe it's the alliteration, but it really pops off the medium. Lovely work.

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  7. Mystic_MomMarch 23, 2014 at 1:55 PM

    oh this is very good...well done!

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