Woven
Lay
Happiness, cupped
Poignant moments, tucked
Invoking a smile in sigh
Catalyzing a catharsis, sometimes, unlocking experience, enlightening wisdom
A collection of myriad hues in form and substance, collated over a lifetime.
This poem is based on a Fibonacci sequence in which the numbers are in a sequence: 0,1,1,2,3,5,8,13,21, etc. or 1,1,2,3,5,8,13,21, etc. and each subsequent number is the sum of the previous two.
For Verse First, at Poets United.
Immaculate sequence..Great job!
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of collated hues.
ReplyDeletewell done, a beautiful result
ReplyDeleteVery nice. I especially like the very strong last line!
ReplyDeletevery colorful and unique memories to be sure
ReplyDeleteYou are amongst the few who used word count rather than syllable total to meet the prompt criteria. This approach makes for a completely different reading experience, focusing more on content than cadence. A refreshing change from what I have encountered this week. That last line is a delight.
ReplyDeleteA satisfying read.
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