tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post874619650427529960..comments2023-06-11T08:03:00.675-07:00Comments on Novel ideas!: TRAPPED! - an ode to my watchTCPChttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-18406114016919643972014-01-13T08:11:11.360-08:002014-01-13T08:11:11.360-08:00I love it Akila ~ never thought of doing an ode t...I love it Akila ~ never thought of doing an ode to the ticking clock ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-59443717285554653122014-01-11T16:56:59.770-08:002014-01-11T16:56:59.770-08:00"While capturing
Finite moments
Of infinity&q..."While capturing<br />Finite moments<br />Of infinity"<br /><br />was a great line...thanks for posting!Isadora Gruyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13036782300945079952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-6841414275581923702014-01-11T10:54:01.102-08:002014-01-11T10:54:01.102-08:00Very well done with the theme. An integral part of...Very well done with the theme. An integral part of our life can be such nice poetry. Mon.Esprithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11348192101465775124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-20353309491210129982014-01-11T08:47:40.925-08:002014-01-11T08:47:40.925-08:00I love the "finite moments of infinity"....I love the "finite moments of infinity". Great response to the challenge!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-46414799881943811572014-01-11T08:30:07.855-08:002014-01-11T08:30:07.855-08:00Finite moments of infinity…yes, and when we are in...Finite moments of infinity…yes, and when we are inside that sand clock (as we always are) the rest of life is merely reflection. Terrific ode. Thank you.dshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616750784052488695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-33510699099752121402014-01-11T02:59:39.458-08:002014-01-11T02:59:39.458-08:00What a great ode to that wormhole of thing we call...What a great ode to that wormhole of thing we call timepiece -- something that seems to becoming an artefact as watches are replaced by cellphones as time-tellers. Love the paradox of "sand clock / of sacrosanct boundaries," as if the slippage of time was a fixed given of human existence (though not necessarily of any other specie of being). I used the same image for my piece, seeing also the abyss opening there. Fine work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-78918537904985099972014-01-10T19:43:52.594-08:002014-01-10T19:43:52.594-08:00tossed up and down in a sand clock… perfect! The ...tossed up and down in a sand clock… perfect! The Neruda form really melts anything superfluous away, doesn't' it?Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-44304479092446975392014-01-10T14:49:29.793-08:002014-01-10T14:49:29.793-08:00Wonderful Neruda form! It comes in bursts of delig...Wonderful Neruda form! It comes in bursts of delights. Nicely wrapped up, Akila!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-88237740486159720022014-01-10T13:42:08.000-08:002014-01-10T13:42:08.000-08:00Very well done ode.. Really love this, the finite ...Very well done ode.. Really love this, the finite moments of infinity really caught mebrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-87850130098155022352014-01-10T10:57:07.938-08:002014-01-10T10:57:07.938-08:00very nice and well done, i like the way it makes y...very nice and well done, i like the way it makes you feel time and experience it.alan1704https://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-12032215597753482852014-01-10T10:06:27.004-08:002014-01-10T10:06:27.004-08:00A very interesting ode to the watch, that finite i...A very interesting ode to the watch, that finite instrument of the infinite realm.Ron Shieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15906697750712674256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-47359517290773894692014-01-10T09:40:09.844-08:002014-01-10T09:40:09.844-08:00I like "Finite moments of infinity" and ...I like "Finite moments of infinity" and the repetition of in second stanza. Nice rhythm.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-68608448251283247802014-01-10T09:32:29.783-08:002014-01-10T09:32:29.783-08:00to breath inside the sand clock...within the hourg...to breath inside the sand clock...within the hourglass..<br />that part stuck out to me...not always easy either.<br />as it is always flowing....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-89420198612988453002014-01-10T09:20:50.530-08:002014-01-10T09:20:50.530-08:00Nice rhythm! I enjoyed following it :)Nice rhythm! I enjoyed following it :)humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-16431662392351751032014-01-10T09:19:10.019-08:002014-01-10T09:19:10.019-08:00capturing
Finite moments
Of infinity... what a coo...capturing<br />Finite moments<br />Of infinity... what a cool ode to your watch... time is a big topic..ha...the older i get, the more... smiles.. i love neruda...would love to be able to read him in spanishClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-45206183642409251022014-01-10T09:10:50.024-08:002014-01-10T09:10:50.024-08:00Now that I look at the orb, everything does seem t...Now that I look at the orb, everything does seem to moving around and around like my watch! All at the same time, capturing those finite moments! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-46660398999178902782014-01-10T08:26:19.333-08:002014-01-10T08:26:19.333-08:00What an interesting interpretation - you capture t...What an interesting interpretation - you capture that sense of infinity one gets when looking at the orb.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com