tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post7717441194598258136..comments2023-06-11T08:03:00.675-07:00Comments on Novel ideas!: NOT EVERYTHING IS MORTALTCPChttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-12157993032773165122014-03-30T11:23:34.285-07:002014-03-30T11:23:34.285-07:00Is it the end of summer there? I didn't realiz...Is it the end of summer there? I didn't realize you were "upside down to us" as well as Australia/New Zealand etc. I always thought India had completely different kinds of seasons - exotic, rainy, brilliant, and cool...ha! A romantic picture undoubtedly of the subcontinent which in itself is so varied. I love the look inside a home you loved and stayed in. Cool shadows and fond memories still dwell within!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-58091187478769931162014-03-29T10:47:41.239-07:002014-03-29T10:47:41.239-07:00I like the refraining lines of the pedestal fan wh...I like the refraining lines of the pedestal fan whirling ~ It speaks of the time passing, before and after ~ Enjoyed the details of your summer memories ~<br /><br />Grace Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-61390763040410363652014-03-29T05:53:12.274-07:002014-03-29T05:53:12.274-07:00I like the ephemeral feel of this poem - a bit lik...I like the ephemeral feel of this poem - a bit like our lives.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-56549860300595126462014-03-29T05:27:18.639-07:002014-03-29T05:27:18.639-07:00Great capture of your memories.Great capture of your memories.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-87639931682723172832014-03-29T02:27:46.442-07:002014-03-29T02:27:46.442-07:00Beautiful and very atmospheric poem, Akila! I can ...Beautiful and very atmospheric poem, Akila! I can hear and see the fan. I like the form you chose as well as the wistful memories and images. Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-11019520346550200532014-03-29T01:43:59.562-07:002014-03-29T01:43:59.562-07:00I really enjoyed the way you've repeatedly ret...I really enjoyed the way you've repeatedly returned to the motif of the whirring fan between the stanzas that capture your memories.<br /><br />Is there any chance of hearing <i>you</i> read it?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-61926649981651414422014-03-29T00:02:36.722-07:002014-03-29T00:02:36.722-07:00this is a beautiful capture of your memories akila...this is a beautiful capture of your memories akila... reminded me of the summers i spent with my grandparents on their farm in bavaria..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-1772952095574257872014-03-28T20:45:12.228-07:002014-03-28T20:45:12.228-07:00Excellent description! I have a place like this to...Excellent description! I have a place like this too, where I visit my grandparents.. not every summer now though, of course.. it's a distinct childhood memory, and you captured it so well, I feel my memory mingling with your poem! The bamboo blinds, pedestal fan, all setting the scene of hot Indian summers... Fantastic! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-83202218321053038222014-03-28T20:16:28.893-07:002014-03-28T20:16:28.893-07:00smiles...they are good memories to carry...i like ...smiles...they are good memories to carry...i like the split of the poem and how you bring them both together there in the end with the link of that fan...i have some great memories of a summer with my great uncle that i carry with me often...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com