tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post6798863659759276829..comments2023-06-11T08:03:00.675-07:00Comments on Novel ideas!: ALONE...TCPChttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-68345401957454754852013-06-09T08:44:44.529-07:002013-06-09T08:44:44.529-07:00Both beautiful, art is a constant reinvention. Tha...Both beautiful, art is a constant reinvention. Thank you for sharing the song as well. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17392858163745232319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-20902224284139166142013-06-08T09:47:20.061-07:002013-06-08T09:47:20.061-07:00The original is beautiful, but I love what you did...The original is beautiful, but I love what you did with it. Two completely different works, equally lovely.<br />Thank you.dshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616750784052488695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-29638341595179539742013-06-08T08:02:38.679-07:002013-06-08T08:02:38.679-07:00I can understand why you love the original piece b...I can understand why you love the original piece by Rabindranath Tagore - and thanks for introducing him to me - beautiful soulful words.<br /><br />Your DaDa process is lovely too - the isolation appears more acute - but is not disrespectful of the original - so please don't feel guilty.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-30300817324121298932013-06-08T01:16:05.750-07:002013-06-08T01:16:05.750-07:00You did very well Akila! You chose a poem from an ...You did very well Akila! You chose a poem from an esteemed poet and still managed to match it with yours. That says a lot. You followed the process to a tee. That could be the reason you came in with a gem! Nicely!<br /><br />Hank kaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-20327583058598955312013-06-07T20:42:22.689-07:002013-06-07T20:42:22.689-07:00Charles!
This song is so popular and resonating t...Charles!<br /><br />This song is so popular and resonating that on second thought I felt I should have used some other piece for DADA. But the love for the original piece made me do it, well perhaps the reason for my guilt too. Nevertheless, I enjoyed the processTCPChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-40100714009264614322013-06-07T19:58:12.816-07:002013-06-07T19:58:12.816-07:00Your technique, which I liked, created a very spar...Your technique, which I liked, created a very sparse mood... I really liked <br />Alone…I travel<br />Down the tracks lined in blood<br />Very powerful.<br />-MikeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-36853152461119784062013-06-07T16:27:55.884-07:002013-06-07T16:27:55.884-07:00You did an excellent job. :)You did an excellent job. :)ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-74547753831011816842013-06-07T16:16:39.114-07:002013-06-07T16:16:39.114-07:00It was really interesting to read the whole proces...It was really interesting to read the whole process, and I think the Dada form calls on us to relax our normal tendencies and self-imposed constraints, so you should not feel guilty at all. You took the poem, you took the form, and you have given us Akila uniqueness.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09589253190731511955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-45258054516063512102013-06-07T14:29:26.978-07:002013-06-07T14:29:26.978-07:00I am sorry to hear that you feel guilty about taki...I am sorry to hear that you feel guilty about taking the piece and using the dada method. In these situations I try to combine various other texts to see the outcome. That way the original retains its integrity and perhaps one does not feel guilty as you do. As it is, I think the result of your experiment has compelling parts too.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-57465020301668437562013-06-07T13:36:18.540-07:002013-06-07T13:36:18.540-07:00Oh my goodness - I love the process and love love ...Oh my goodness - I love the process and love love love the final poem. wonderful response to the prompt and a beautiful poem - kAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-53472497742894119442013-06-07T12:19:28.642-07:002013-06-07T12:19:28.642-07:00Akila, You created another masterpiece. Kudos girl...Akila, You created another masterpiece. Kudos girl....♥ Truly impressed...!!Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-33476522349898938692013-06-07T11:27:53.186-07:002013-06-07T11:27:53.186-07:00cool on making the process transparent for us... t...cool on making the process transparent for us... the tracks lined in blood...the unanswered call...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-33320370820964237572013-06-07T05:49:40.848-07:002013-06-07T05:49:40.848-07:00I think you have created something new & uniqu...I think you have created something new & uniquely your voice, certainly different from the original piece ~ The loneliness is palpable here ~ Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-16272835401793994152013-06-07T05:03:07.554-07:002013-06-07T05:03:07.554-07:00The treaded thorns leaving tracks of blood--that i...The treaded thorns leaving tracks of blood--that is a powerful image, so full of meaning. Nicely done!Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10858791213787473858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-49187714763803840552013-06-07T04:42:39.367-07:002013-06-07T04:42:39.367-07:00Hi Akila, Thanks for showing your process and you ...Hi Akila, Thanks for showing your process and you have some very nice lines here even if you are not fully pleased- I especially like the line about the thunder - which carries a certain ominous pain. This is Karin at http://Manicddaily.wordpress.com. I am commenting on a mobile device that makes me be stuck with an old blogger blog. k. Outlawyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15698845661756444061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-16938516973791374222013-06-07T03:30:59.050-07:002013-06-07T03:30:59.050-07:00A wonderful accomplishment. I liked seeing your p...A wonderful accomplishment. I liked seeing your process as well as your resulting poem. The repetition of the word "Alone" really makes your poem strong!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-9063082598461733632013-06-07T02:46:15.161-07:002013-06-07T02:46:15.161-07:00Awesome poetry you have created from a very good p...Awesome poetry you have created from a very good poetry to start withbrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com