tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post6569859234650039681..comments2023-06-11T08:03:00.675-07:00Comments on Novel ideas!: I DON'T CARE...TCPChttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-18959898156535047032013-04-06T21:43:56.742-07:002013-04-06T21:43:56.742-07:00I am living, apparently
Momentarily, or so...
and...I am living, apparently<br />Momentarily, or so...<br /><br />and I don't care... This poem is really about what is NOT said... nice job.<br />Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-74289336033818301832013-04-06T09:25:02.968-07:002013-04-06T09:25:02.968-07:00Very passionate fantastic use of the prompts!Very passionate fantastic use of the prompts!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-56327248310295783982013-04-05T21:38:50.786-07:002013-04-05T21:38:50.786-07:00I DON'T CARE, and yet it all reverberates, it ...I DON'T CARE, and yet it all reverberates, it permeates and you have to care<br /><br /><a href="http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2013/04/05/first-rose/" rel="nofollow">First Rose</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-32804687656473747062013-04-05T21:30:03.013-07:002013-04-05T21:30:03.013-07:00brilliant attempt akhila! the lines are truly libe...brilliant attempt akhila! the lines are truly liberating. very nicely written!:)Malinyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04593484251880193308noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-16974805682557605692013-04-05T21:23:38.859-07:002013-04-05T21:23:38.859-07:00Yes, the "I don't care" seems very i...Yes, the "I don't care" seems very ironic.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09589253190731511955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-13061170418401954462013-04-05T19:11:39.966-07:002013-04-05T19:11:39.966-07:00An unusual approach, handled very well.
KAn unusual approach, handled very well.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-22963536436004680562013-04-05T14:34:00.033-07:002013-04-05T14:34:00.033-07:00I love the resounding and ironic - I don't car...I love the resounding and ironic - I don't care refrain ~ <br /><br />Well done on the prompts ~<br /><br />Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-11323836048432376282013-04-05T13:22:19.050-07:002013-04-05T13:22:19.050-07:00The close of this gave me shivers.The close of this gave me shivers.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-20328642051795070342013-04-05T10:54:25.713-07:002013-04-05T10:54:25.713-07:00wow...nice intensity in this...it reminds me a bit...wow...nice intensity in this...it reminds me a bit of the music that is very popular right now...lot of emotion, but also the ambivilence...but i wonder too if it is false bravado to hide true feelings.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-38354039012446035732013-04-05T10:46:55.131-07:002013-04-05T10:46:55.131-07:00Wow, Akila. What a great idea to "listen"...Wow, Akila. What a great idea to "listen" to a video on mute and let it take you where it will. Very nicely written and you've managed to multitask with one poem. Hope the weekend allows you to take a deep breath and relax.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-31247827143565438432013-04-05T09:48:55.355-07:002013-04-05T09:48:55.355-07:00smiles...i agree with what mary says..those that s...smiles...i agree with what mary says..those that scream loudest i don't care are those that deeply care usuallyClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-72057629925494742762013-04-05T07:13:12.540-07:002013-04-05T07:13:12.540-07:00My first thoughts: You do care. I care. You tackle...My first thoughts: You do care. I care. You tackled the irony and made me give voice. Well done.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-42511135419024373482013-04-05T06:36:02.020-07:002013-04-05T06:36:02.020-07:00"screams an empty soul echo
I don't care..."screams an empty soul echo<br /><br />I don't care, I don't care."<br /><br />This is indeed powerful fare, Akila. But oftentimes I find that someone who says so loudly that they don't care really does care deeply. One can hope this is true here as well.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com