tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post5036054997080310794..comments2023-06-11T08:03:00.675-07:00Comments on Novel ideas!: WHEN AND HOW….the journey continues…TCPChttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-28889131903531867272014-03-10T19:16:41.076-07:002014-03-10T19:16:41.076-07:00Woww such a beautiful such. The imagery is stunnin...Woww such a beautiful such. The imagery is stunning.<br />knitting azure dreams of today<br />for tomorrow’s sepia frames// these lines stole my heart.Rajlakshmihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05947753574286557864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-81344343197156149122014-03-06T12:26:11.161-08:002014-03-06T12:26:11.161-08:00What a lovely way to tell your beginning and like ...What a lovely way to tell your beginning and like how your pen would find you. I do remember reading some poetry in school but not really instructed to write any...now I'm wondering why not.Bodhirosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12630769135515322096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-7791231604396605962014-03-06T07:18:02.488-08:002014-03-06T07:18:02.488-08:00 knitting azure dreams of today
for tomorrow’s sep... knitting azure dreams of today<br />for tomorrow’s sepia frames... nice... it def. brings color into our lives...smilesClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-84791556000903025522014-03-05T18:31:56.795-08:002014-03-05T18:31:56.795-08:00Grandmothers are generally the best way to begin t...Grandmothers are generally the best way to begin things. Very lovely poem and lovely journey. Thanks, Akila. K. (Manicddaily) Outlawyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15698845661756444061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-53500150240633195052014-03-05T16:34:39.921-08:002014-03-05T16:34:39.921-08:00Love how this evolved, Akila. The line about fragr...Love how this evolved, Akila. The line about fragrances on a chalkboard really struck me.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-8366646121623085842014-03-05T16:17:18.364-08:002014-03-05T16:17:18.364-08:00I like the pen finding you :) cool !I like the pen finding you :) cool !ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-1664273058281566032014-03-05T15:48:26.336-08:002014-03-05T15:48:26.336-08:00the pen certainly found me... I had no intentions ...the pen certainly found me... I had no intentions of being a poet growing up... crazy how life is sometimes... smiles. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-33982785820901458342014-03-05T15:10:05.517-08:002014-03-05T15:10:05.517-08:00I love this - you are still speaking with your own...I love this - you are still speaking with your own voice, saying things with freshness, bringing us a new viewpoint.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-30243872229678802342014-03-05T13:40:13.039-08:002014-03-05T13:40:13.039-08:00Awesome write! I particularly love the last stanza...Awesome write! I particularly love the last stanza!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-24756373741014270992014-03-05T13:06:39.950-08:002014-03-05T13:06:39.950-08:00fragrances on a chalkboard - what a wonderful imag...fragrances on a chalkboard - what a wonderful image ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-33529695964831668182014-03-05T12:55:28.328-08:002014-03-05T12:55:28.328-08:00I was taught about poetry, never how to write poem...I was taught about poetry, never how to write poems sadly. I like your poem particularly the last stanza and the idea of beginning 'all over again'.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-11034435002866985612014-03-05T12:07:44.227-08:002014-03-05T12:07:44.227-08:00To me it sounds like poetry became part of you nat...To me it sounds like poetry became part of you naturally.. like words falling directly onto paper... love that.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-23989418295482699842014-03-05T10:35:17.592-08:002014-03-05T10:35:17.592-08:00I am not sure either Brian! my poetry then was not...I am not sure either Brian! my poetry then was nothing but rhymes. today they are a catharsis! i guess the process is such...i wonder too how it would have been if i had given a bit more in syncing poetry with the language. TCPChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-73391178003347587912014-03-05T09:12:31.398-08:002014-03-05T09:12:31.398-08:00For some it is the pen, for others being an athlet...For some it is the pen, for others being an athlete or comedian...but yes, the idea is to purge, recreate, redo, invent, re -write, ask, express and always be true to ourselves ;)Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-45057025401450367622014-03-05T07:49:52.232-08:002014-03-05T07:49:52.232-08:00Rich details of memories and lively colors - very ...Rich details of memories and lively colors - very nice write there Akila. So that's how the pen found you. Mon.Esprithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11348192101465775124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-1169547512770959372014-03-05T07:05:57.746-08:002014-03-05T07:05:57.746-08:00I like the idea too of the pen finding you I felt...I like the idea too of the pen finding you I felt that way oftentimes as well. It was the pen that often gave me the comfort and the means of expression that I did not find in other places.A strong ending to your poem...I like 'reflect, revel, reveal.' That is the 'stuff' of poetry, for sure!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-17409618770633638882014-03-05T03:51:31.196-08:002014-03-05T03:51:31.196-08:00I like that bit of the pen finding you ~ The chal...I like that bit of the pen finding you ~ The challenge in writing for me is to begin to begin again ~ Good to see you Akila ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-30131537237603239472014-03-05T03:14:28.756-08:002014-03-05T03:14:28.756-08:00smiles...cool...i dont really remember writing poe...smiles...cool...i dont really remember writing poetry in school...i remember reading it....i wonder if writing it as you were learning english was helpful....did it make it stick?Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com