tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post1551700493429567862..comments2023-06-11T08:03:00.675-07:00Comments on Novel ideas!: MOMENTSTCPChttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-85521309931568658672013-08-18T23:31:06.837-07:002013-08-18T23:31:06.837-07:00Thank you for visiting and catching the intimacy o...Thank you for visiting and catching the intimacy of my words. Your poem made me think of intimacy too. Especially the cupped hands and the emotions behind the word-play. Beautiful. I will follow your updates on Google Plus. :)Anne Vhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00741540499289419526noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-35996952949544633262013-08-17T09:43:46.242-07:002013-08-17T09:43:46.242-07:00Love the form here Akila fabulous =) Transience on...Love the form here Akila fabulous =) Transience one of those inescapable truthsAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-58950345332521919322013-08-16T21:45:35.070-07:002013-08-16T21:45:35.070-07:00...loved this Akila... superb word choices here bu......loved this Akila... superb word choices here but all well commanded... transient bliss --- love love love that... smiles... enjoyed it... thanks...kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-62877019447802784342013-08-16T19:38:45.300-07:002013-08-16T19:38:45.300-07:00'Clocking minutes of significant mutations'...'Clocking minutes of significant mutations' ~ they're really moments, the self-process we always overlooking....nice work :)humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-70615269494167600602013-08-16T11:42:03.792-07:002013-08-16T11:42:03.792-07:00Wonderful wordplay... and using shape as well as a...Wonderful wordplay... and using shape as well as alliterations.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-87942129558044288882013-08-16T11:35:55.869-07:002013-08-16T11:35:55.869-07:00This really was a lot of fun! Enjoyed especially ...This really was a lot of fun! Enjoyed especially the last three lines!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-59369997917060668372013-08-16T07:12:05.266-07:002013-08-16T07:12:05.266-07:00I like the way you have shaped this poem.I like the way you have shaped this poem.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-35675562384391222772013-08-16T06:25:13.131-07:002013-08-16T06:25:13.131-07:00Very nice use of the form, and your words are just...Very nice use of the form, and your words are just so well chosen. A well crafted take on the prompt.Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-36349983275864583252013-08-16T03:38:28.808-07:002013-08-16T03:38:28.808-07:00i like how you chose like words too...the paradox/...i like how you chose like words too...the paradox/parading, conscious/conscience, minute/mutations....there is some nice craft in this beyond the formBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-34645289314692392442013-08-16T01:55:17.572-07:002013-08-16T01:55:17.572-07:00cool play with words here... i like how the words ...cool play with words here... i like how the words sound together - the x's in paradoxical existences for example... cool takeClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-62620685918861966732013-08-16T01:06:46.475-07:002013-08-16T01:06:46.475-07:00I love how you've played with the form here, A...I love how you've played with the form here, Akila. Some of the word combinations are really striking too - 'transient bliss' and 'paradoxical existences' are my favouritesAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com