tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post1302438275287771578..comments2023-06-11T08:03:00.675-07:00Comments on Novel ideas!: TRUTH IS...TCPChttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-79804064155322801742013-05-29T22:08:21.106-07:002013-05-29T22:08:21.106-07:00Loved the "sticky wickets," Akila, so de...Loved the "sticky wickets," Akila, so descriptive of both situation and the spider's footing on the catchall silk. That circular way can be dizzying, for sure. Thanks for coming 'round my site, too! AmyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-90645996867940919322013-05-24T02:02:33.245-07:002013-05-24T02:02:33.245-07:00Loved the line: The fluctuating notions of the min...Loved the line: The fluctuating notions of the mind<br />Sheltering in ponderings. Suzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05337531041006701719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-7796629438629251242013-05-23T19:34:36.042-07:002013-05-23T19:34:36.042-07:00I love the circuitous pathway you traveled through...I love the circuitous pathway you traveled through this poem!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-13543803668762982662013-05-23T16:22:12.121-07:002013-05-23T16:22:12.121-07:00the image is an ideal accompaniment. and the merry...the image is an ideal accompaniment. and the merry-go-round-like feel of the narrative allows the reader to feel a certain fatality, futility.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-73886154327519592052013-05-23T15:00:35.886-07:002013-05-23T15:00:35.886-07:00How ironic that at the end, we bow down to death, ...How ironic that at the end, we bow down to death, the inescapable truth ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-18662894905520018452013-05-23T14:20:45.980-07:002013-05-23T14:20:45.980-07:00The spider is a totem for the writer, weaving his/...The spider is a totem for the writer, weaving his/her world from its own juices. I like your use of language here, and the image you used to mirror your words,<br /><br />Elizabeth<br />http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2013/05/22/distillation-of-truth/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-71170576854614685232013-05-23T09:39:32.865-07:002013-05-23T09:39:32.865-07:00Lovely poem. Loved the wordplay and the meanings i...Lovely poem. Loved the wordplay and the meanings it brought out. Keep writing. :)Anand S Unnihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06000744958432605565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-88118777796622295502013-05-23T07:07:56.492-07:002013-05-23T07:07:56.492-07:00I really like how you compared the threads of life...I really like how you compared the threads of life vs. threads of a spiders web!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-59232912040047197762013-05-23T06:42:41.329-07:002013-05-23T06:42:41.329-07:00 I love this line: (both the way it sounds and fee... I love this line: (both the way it sounds and feels)<br /><br />Revealing voids<br />Of my velleity<br /><br />An honest poem.<br /><br />parentforward.blogspot.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02363442700397713616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-6091359274225084262013-05-23T04:42:19.438-07:002013-05-23T04:42:19.438-07:00So much of life is circuitous. You have captured ...So much of life is circuitous. You have captured that idea well.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-82225227436198478282013-05-23T01:47:19.910-07:002013-05-23T01:47:19.910-07:00the words you have used is Gr8............the words you have used is Gr8............Aishwarya Mageshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13389941948853317331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-30643358199693784972013-05-23T01:05:18.565-07:002013-05-23T01:05:18.565-07:00Powerful in conjunction with that visual image!Powerful in conjunction with that visual image!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-29254912691501893082013-05-23T00:56:21.894-07:002013-05-23T00:56:21.894-07:00I love the language you have used in this and some...I love the language you have used in this and something about the pace mirrors real life beautifully. I can certainly relate to your words!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3267755887536052469.post-890058672361722422013-05-22T23:54:14.574-07:002013-05-22T23:54:14.574-07:00When end comes, all will be here only and yes deat...When end comes, all will be here only and yes death is the final truth.Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.com